Friday, June 22, 2012

Rio Vista and Foothills Week Two: Dialogue


Week Two: All the Things They Say

If your characters are human they likely enjoy dialogue. We are a social species, we humans, and we are a little bit narcissistic too. Humans love to hear ourselves talk. We will run our mouths dry on a topic we are impassioned with. We have entire systems of education, and communities based on chattering at one another. So, what makes our characters any different? Purpose.

The dialogue in a story has intention. Whether the words we offer our characters to speak offer insight into plot or personality, they do have purpose. If characters are discussing the weather it should probably have some greater point than making small talk.

Exercise for Class or Group:

Trade Week One Dialogue assignments with another writer.  Write the dialogue for one another’s observed actions.

Was the description in the Week One Exercise enough to guess the mood of the characters?  If so, did you feel the dialogue added or reduced the flow of the ‘story’.  If not, how would you improve upon the description, what is missing?

Exercise for Lone Writers: 

Talk to yourself!  Walk around the house or sit very still, but always be looking in a mirror.  Let the dialogue flow.  Just be a chatterbox.  Soliloquy your heart out, or tell someone how they have made you feel and play the part of the other too, listen to the responses. 

Or

Maybe mom was wrong, eavesdropping could be good for the writer’s soul.  Play super spy at a public location.  Listen in and try to write down the conversations of those around you.  Note little nuances of speech and if there is a gesture or facial affect that goes with certain moods.


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